I can sense alot of anger in this but it gets to the point and your feelings our shown well. Perhaps you could write a happier poem?

Forget wat that ozzy guy said about your anger issues, tis poem is totally raw and wicked, sense i used to cut myself(my parents took away my knife) i totally get where yur coming from, i hate people who want to be like someone else, i wish i could just beat one up, because they are posers, maybe some time you can check out my stuff, my fav is blood as cold as ice, later

I know what you mean.
Sorta like Brenda when she was all look a i cut.
What a poser!

Well I would like to say I can understand the deal with posers but you do realize there are people who actually do cut for many reasons? i know there are people who are like "oh I cut" just to get attention. But many people face the problem in a real way not a fake way.

It is a good poem though.

Some people do cut just for attention. Some people do it to be cool. that's very true. But a lot of people cut because they're hurt or scared or whatever the reason.

Cutting doesn't ever FIX anything.

IF U REALLY WANTED TO KILL UR-SELF U WOULD OF ALREADY DONE IT...

^^ this line...bugged me. idk. i know a lot of people who have wanted to kill themselves and i'm so thankful that htey haven't. i mean...think about it. would you say this to your best friend if they came to you trying to talk about suicide?

DON'T USE A STRAIGHT KNIFE USE A RIGGED ONE THEY HELP U DIE QUICKER...

^^ this line made me question the purpose of the poem. are you promoting cutting...or are you not? idk. i got kind of confused at this point.

so while the work is pretty good, i disagree. but that's just my personal opinion. have a good day. :)