Very good I liked the way it flowed. Take care Drew 5/5

That was very good, it flowed well, and i liked the idea of twisted tears, and all the emotions, well done
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Great job i understand dis poem and it had a lot of emotion to it feeling to so i give u a 5/5

Hey I like this poem :) it's awesome :)

This is a gr8 poem!!!
I loved it!!!
Its full of emotion, well expressed and very sad!!!
Gr8 job!!
Keep it up!!!
5/5

Excellent Job full of fund and emotions of love....:) Keep It up

Great job on this piece very emotional thats wot i like to see hehe i hope you write more poems there so good xx

Title is excellent. Second stanza is BAD you repeated words -drowning- and -tears- too many times. Last line in third stanza is same like first line in fourth stanza.

Wow, good one. Let me start with the title- it's effective and captivating. First stanza could have one extra word in the last line, because of the flow, like:
- Sometimes I THINK I'd rather drown-
or something like that.
The rest of the poem is amazing, I can relate to it.

Great job. Title is original and the topic is easily related to. An emotional and fine read.
Keep writing.
5/5
~ Lainey

Very nice poem. Your word choice is exceptionally great. The content is cohesive and coherent with the caption. Keep it up. Your poems are lively :)

Tc
Fsams

Very nice poem, well written and good word use.

Nice portrayal of emotions and feelings.

Only improvement I would suggest is the changing the first 'tears' to something else as I think it seems a little too repetative. Apart from that, it's pretty near perfect.

5/5 well done :)

The lay out of this poem really catches the eye and it is full of strong emotion a marvelous choice of words only one small mistakes:
Now I'm just laying in al my pain. should be "all my pain"