Comments : Life will go on (Life seems perfect)

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A very heartfelt, thoughtful poem. This verse touched me as I read it as the words are very true...

    "Life seems perfect...
    but when you grow up
    something happens
    you grow out of the fairytale
    nothings perfect anymore"

    ( I still remember feeling that way at the age of 18! Lol)

    Life IS full of ups and downs... but you re right... we gotta keep going! Lol :)

    A well written and expressed poem, Well done!