Comments : Shes my girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    WOW...MF im like blown away!!
    The flow was like perfect..
    I "LOVED" the second and third stanza!!
    5/5

    TORM

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Awww...very sweet. I'm very happy for you..if the poem is true. The rhyming was great and the words were so beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mitsuki

    THis so sweet. I just love it. I really feel that poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I love your love poems!! They make me smile and get all tingly inside...lol they make me wanna write too but...i've been lazy...anywhos...another B.E.A.U.tiful poem...mucho love

    [[ Poetess ]] =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Denise

    Awwww....david...i didnt know you were such a sap....thats so cute...lol....