Aww,way to make me cry :'( your an amazing poet!and i rely mean that!

So sad.
some parts I wasa little lost but you brought me backa gain through the rhyme
Excellent
5/5
~Emah

Oh wow I loved this poem, didnt even realize it was long becuase it just flowed together so well. Great job, 5/5

OMG!!!! This one made me cry. My fiance' is in the Army and he will be deploying in Janurary of 2008 if not sooner. I only hope its not before our wedding day( we are getting married October of 2007). I fear about this every single day of my life and I pray to God that I never have to here those words. This one really hit home and I just love it.

Excellent

Awweh. Lovely. Long! But Excellent.
Worth the read. 5.

xx.Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay.xx

That poem was really good your very talented.

That made me cry! it was long but wow it was soo wonderfully good! *gives you 5 stars*
love ya always
Fruitcup

This is a great poem i loved it you are a great poet.Keep up the good work.5/5

Great poem, i like the ending and how true it is to life. i like it, if i had 3 thumbs i raise them all but i only got 2, so 2 thumbs up

Woww this is great it brought a tear to my eyes i love it keep up the good work.Awesome poem5/4.
xoxostrugglingxoxo

Woww this is great it brought a tear to my eyes i love it keep up the good work.Awesome poem5/4.
xoxostrugglingxoxo

Wow this is an amazing poem it is fantastic and so touching . although it looks so long and dull it is well worth reading it all. very good . well done.

Oh my God.........................................this poem is AMAZING...you left me breathless...i don't even know what to SAY. You portayed so many people's emotions and fears in this poem so vividly and deeply...i truly believe it COULDN'T have been done better..EXCELLENT. 5/5 :)

Ge thanx! it made me cry! apart from tht holy hell thts gud!

Its really good
keep up the good work

I really like it. well worded and very touching

DUDE dat poem rocks. some day u will bcome a poetist. keep up da good work.
luv guillo

Wow this is an amazing poem. there are so many people out there that can really relate to this. im speechless.. great poem. keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine.
dee

That was awesome...keep up the good work....10/5 that hit me cuz my cousin is in iraq right now...and im getting married too so i dont want to loose my feonce....very good