Wow. what can i say?? emotional, so heartfelt, a GREAT write, so sad. 5/5 for that. so long, but and awesome piece. i'm hoping that isn't true for ur sake, but it seems to truely written to be not, so in that case, i'll just say great poem.

really, nice work. =)
xxx
p.s. u have a spelling error in the last line, i'm guessing it should say 'luke i love u', but it says 'like i love u'.

MA i GiVE Y0U S0 MUCH PR0PS`Z F0R WRiTiNG THiS i KN0W iT MUST HAVE BEEN HARD. AND JUSS REMEMBER iM HERE F0R Y0U N0 MATTER WUT BABE.

This is really good. I love this poem a lot. I kinda now how you feel. Losing someone that you cared so much about and that you went through alot with. I dont think anyone should have to go through it, but everyone does. Great poem and awesome emotions. 5/5!

I love your poems you are an excellent writer you should go to college for writing i would still remember you if you wrote a book cause your so excellent very well written WRITE SOME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is one of the saddest poems i have ever read this must have been such a hard time but just keep ur head up and try to put a smile on i promise things are going to get easier!

Ilana