This poem is very good..Brought a tear to my eye..Wonderful job..You are a very good writer..Thanks for the comment on my poem..Keep writing.. 5/5 for sure..
Crystal

Awesome poem! just wonderful! sad but wonderful! you can write great! keep it up! GBU!! PEPA

This poem was good i really liked it, it showed us how you felt and made us feel how you were feeling... your a good poet and dont need advise but to just keep writing like you are and you'll see that you shine!!!!

lizzy

Wow nice poem. I really like your writing :). Nice job!