Comments : First Smile

  • 17 years ago

    by mummy

    Wow

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    *tear*...alright now thats what I like to read from you :-) Happiness....Whenever you write about that precious boy I always cry!! I just love kids, more then likely will be a teacher, but I just imagine sometimes me writing a poem like this...in about 8 years though! I'm glad you posted another poem Risa because you know how badly I miss your poetry..your my favorite! I'm your number one fan..and to read something other then sadness from you, you have no idea how big my smile is...I love you darling Big Titta!
    xoxoxox
    Bubba Titta

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Aside from all those hours of pain
    I would never hesitate to go through it all again
    Each and every tear of my pregnancies trial
    Did disappear into time when I saw my sons first smile.

    ^^
    This part is so beautifully heart touching Erisa ! Being a mother I can totally relate to every word . Beautiful poem Erisa !

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    This poem was so sweet, and I can totally relate to it.. as soon as You see the first smile it makes it all worth while ;) great work xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, this read is so full of memories
    of when my son was growing in his mothers
    tummy to the time he was born. Precious
    as life is a miracle so we have also been
    blessed with giving life and delivering life.
    Thank you for sharing a wonderful poem,
    Bogie