Now this one i love!
The words almost seemed magical, if that makes sense.
I love love poems and this one is amazing, it's very different from the normal ones i read and you seemed to put a lot of heart into this piece, it's excellent
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Be your fanasty ok lol just jokin keep up the good work i

This is great! You have a very discrptive way of writing that just pulls the reader right in. Excellent!

I thought this was excellent. The flow was brilliant, and the descriptions were wonderful. Excellent job.

By the way, sorry for just getting round to your 10 comments now, I've just been so busy. =]

Wow
great work!
keep it up
-Lisa