Well if u ask me u cant improve it much more its a great poem, keep it up.

It was good but u kind of lost me with all the baby girls. lol
unless u plan on naming it that.

I really like this poem. It is so true that love never leaves your side once it's there. Mistakes and hurt are what make us strong. Emotion makes the best poems great job on this one.

I honestly cant think of way that you could improve that. its fantastic. definately good advice, all so true. keep up the great work.
Tammie

I like this poem too its pretty cool.

This poem is really awesome. I feel all girls should think this way before they commit with any guy. Good Job done. keep up the good work. Cheers...
Venki....:)

Hey, like your style, you certainly have a way with words.
Like the rest of the comments I cannot see how you can improve this good work.

Keep them coming of the pen ... and I for one will keep reading them.

Success........................ Gor

I dont think u can improve its really good very insperational :)

ashleigh