Wow this is great i really like it!
keep it up!

I liked the repitition but it just feel apart with the not so mature words.
it seemed like a fun poem though
4/5
it was still enjoyable and readble just think before u write.
~Emma

Could have been better, But i loved your imagination and ideas. So Keep sharing your feelings. 5/4!

Hey, i didnt love this one, it kinda made me smile, the rhyming was very forced, even you have to agree to that, but it wasnt that bad, really.
xxxx