This poem is really good i liked reading it i have an idea

where you put 'you still hold my entire heart'

maybe .... 'you still hold the key to my entire heart.

i dont know just a suggestion xxx

would you comment on my poems plz i like as much feedback as poss thnx xxx alex xxx

Wow Thats Good 5/5 From Me

Wow Thats Good 5/5 From Me

What The Hell I Only Done That Comment Once And It Done It Twice Ummm ??

Really niice =)
I like it alot.
Good job
5/5

Hey i feel the motions lol. it happens to me alot. because of the way i get with woman. i turn out to be more like the soft big brother then any thing else and u no it really SUCKS lol.