What does "she told the nurses to get bent" mean?
I think this is a great poem! I like thelength and how it doesn't ryhme too much.

Miranda

Omg wat a sad poem almost brought me to tears

Wow yet another great poem. This was very emotionally written. The flow and the structure was very well. Great job.

Peace, Joe

Wow this is good and a long poem i really like it how you say it in this poem...keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed this.

You managed to write about something that alot of people have done before without going into the cliche category this time.

Flow was good for the most part, it was just one or two places were it got kind of shaky, but you made up for that with the wonderful imagery you created and the depth and emotion in this piece.

While being kind of long, you held my interest throughout the whole piece.

Wonderful job on this.

She morned her brother
every waking hour of every day
hoping she would die
that god would just take her away
-wow,i've been there, this is really sad, but it's very good, kept me reading!