Omg. this is soo good. i love it. wow. this is like how i feel right now too. its awesome. you have good writing.

I like this one - the mood feels like someone who wants to burst out but is just barely restraining... sad

Hey thanks for the comment! anyway wow great poem! i loved this! it had great descriptions..it really painted a picture! loved it...5/5

Confusing....

defnatley sad though..

october xx

I luv it...it's so vivid...has wonderful imagery...it's great

I like it, Good write.

Woah well done. You captured how we feel in this situation well.

-Kayla

... good poem, im here if you need someone to talk to, you wrote me a comment a while ago, and for a while ive been stubborn and not talking to anyone, but i figured id give you a chance like you gave me..