I wrote this poem for a person when we where at the same school..a very silly one...i didn't have anything new so i desided to post my old ones.

It is a nice poem as I can relate to now,lol.
great poem again. your poems are so nice and i feel like i understand each word of it.

I am so glad that u can relate to it..but in wat way...it was a poem I wrote very long time ago but never finished it..maybe someday I will..

Its a nice poem... i advice you to keep it the way it is... dont try to edit it by writing ahead... this one looks better as it is... keep writing...