I really loved that, excellent work and keep it up. 5/5

Jessie xD

Excellent work. Very well written and easy to follow. Great work. 5/5

A unstable, emotional heart does lye,
[lie? maybe?]
People dieing around her, with ill health.
[dying]

Very interesting poem.. Not something you read everyday. Great way of explaining yourself... I'm not sure what else to say.. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex5.5

I really like this poem,it kinda makes me think.but all in all its great!!! :)

*cindie*

Makes me think, =)

Great poem