Kinda weird, but kool! u write great!

It was good but on your forth stanza you wrote wee instead of were

and on a more personal note i think that your poem could have done without the last two stanzas
5/5

Your poem is great!you wrote it from your heart!

This is a really cool poem. I never would have thought to write about that. Good job.

Thanks for the comment on my poem Broken Heart.

It's a good poem. for some odd reason it reminds me of romeo and juliet (i have no clue why). im not into the whole rhyming scheem (over all not just yours) but if i was into it it would be a good poem.

This was good.. the flow was a little off and the rhymes didn't really fit in that well.. but the descriptions were good and the imagery was beautiful.. nice job 4/5

Nice

This poem is really cool.
thanks for the comment.
hope to read from u again soon.

I really liked it, it had a lot of feeling to it. It was very different but good job!

Unusual yah..

It sounds a wee bit a nursery rhyme, but nothing like that..its..the nursery rhyme for adults..

If u know "The Little Prince", its something like that..A fairytale for adults..

Unusual..yeah..exactly.

but Good. :)

This is a nice poem. i like the flow of it. I hope you keep writting... please comment my poems and rate them thanks!~DARK~

This is a nice poem. i like the flow of it. I hope you keep writting... please comment my poems and rate them thanks!~DARK~