Comments : Beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Jerbear

    Great! I almost started crying! I've never done drugs (which I'm guessing is part of this poem, but I can still see a great mental image! try checking out some of my stuff!


  • 14 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really like the verse, "Like a delicate, warming flame that I never want to smother. You haven't lost your beauty from lighting up another." Great job!!! 5/5! And thanx for your comments!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a tender beautiful poem. Imagery is excellent. Your love shines in this piece.

    The most tender, perfect rose
    The most beautiful Ive ever met.

    Love these lines.
    take care Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet Little Lie

    Wow this is so beautiful great poem 10/10