I liked this it was really good i thought it may be too short then i looked at the end and i found that it was perfect timeing you poem is sooo tru keep it up :):):):)

Please would you comment on some of my poems i like as much feedback as poss thnx XxX AlEx XxX

This is a really good poem!! i know what your feeling in this poem......i have been threw it enough to know! if its not one its all of them and it hurts a lot!!!! great job keep writing!
Amanda