Excellent write. it was beautifully portrayed by your words. i really enjoyed. great job. 5/5
Driver

0mg that was s0 beautiful a greatuse 0f w0rds. keep it up!! thank u for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx

What a great piece of imagination dear....this is really fantastic...selection of words and the way u used them....remarkable

really loved it

all the best and take care

BEAUTIFUL............i mean u sure have an art of creating a picture with ur words good poem friend.regards Ankit

That's a beautiful poem. the words are just amazing with the image they create. Thanks for your comments. It means alot.

Jemma

I really enjoyed this. Your description is very detailed and i can easily visualise what you are talking about. A great write. I'd also like to thank you for your comment. It means alot. Keep up the great work. =]

Beautiful poem you penned here, The brilliant colours of the setting sun, She walks along the emerald sea, The feeling he had when your heart was won, For, that is what she have meant to her.

beautiful done myfriend, and thanks for your comment, much appreciated...take care... bert ~

Sorry, i mean him not "her"

Awww very sweet story-like poem

laura