Hey, nice work, i am 12 goin on 13 and wanna be this good by the time i am 14, australia, where in australia do u live. bye

Cute poem. I like the rhyming scheme you used and the flow. Good Job

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A really nice poem,
great words with great flow
keep it up.5/5

Such a cute poem read it over and over well done!!!