Comments : And all i found were these tears in your eyes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kellie

    Hey, i had to read this twice to understand it but i think i finally got it! :P it sounds pretty good. i really loved the end bit , that really stood out to me.
    xxxkelliexxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I was a little confused at what it meant, but I think I understand what you were trying to get across. If I do then if was REALLY good...and if I don't then I'm still really lost, lol. But I did like the phrasiology and the idea of the poem was cool. Keep it up!
    ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Good Job! i really really like it. you have a talent!! :D