I really did like this one, i love nature poems, this was really good. it flowed well, and was so imaginable, i could see it all clearly, the way you used the words at the end of each stanza really gave the poem some life, keep writing, this poem was breathtaking
xxxxxxx

This is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.

this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin

lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx

would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx

Wow cant believe how good that was

this is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.

this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin

lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx

would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx

I put u on my favs :):):):) xxx alex xxx

Loved this. Speshly how you repeated some of those words at the end in the last stanza. Very well done. The flow was good too. Nothing that I'd change. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Wow that's pretty deep. I didn't know where you were going with this poem at first but you definately surprised me! This is one of the best poems I have ever read, hands down. Keep it up!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy