Comments : He's ill

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    0mg this was really touching.. hope everythings works out ok

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not sure about this poem either..Something about it turns me off.. But the flow was excellent, like always.. Try using bigger words and discriptive words.

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