I loved it, it flowed okay, a bit rocky, but to be expected in this type of poem. a good topic. well done
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I liked this poem, its short but still very good and well written. good job.
Driver

I loved this poem!! Wonderful choice of words, uniquely written, and both the beginning and ending were great.....short but good!

I loved it

I loved it, especially how that sort of topic isnt to easy to write about and u managed to do a great job on it!!! keep it up!! 5/5 from me

xoxo Lucy

I really like the chocies of words in this poem, great job 5/5

While I did enjoy reading the poem, I found some of it pretty obvious:

Since you say the flame is unique there is no need to say in the next line how it's like no other before.

You say reignite the flame as in commanding it but then later on that sunlight and time healing is what reignites the flame.

Your descriptions were good though, and I liked the format instead of straight across lines. It gave it something nice.

Amazing write. It was a very unique idea, and the imagery that you used was great. I loved the second stanza the best...
The rain dries
Time heals
And the fire ignites
Especially that part, it really stood out to me. You did a great job on this! 5/5

I can see a real shift in style from your older pieces to this one. It's refreshing to see and your diction is interestingly different whilst not feeling pretentious which really adds weight.

Again I think that your work can benefit from the addition of punctuation. In itself punctuation can add another dimension to a piece, making a sentence flow more evenly or allowing the reader to pause, if only for a second to process what has just been read.

Try adding punctuation to a one of your existing poems and see how it compares side by side (I'd suggest printing them out and asking a friend's opinion). You'll see that it can add emotion and pace (both fast and slow) to a work and make it feel more complete.

Nice job on this one... it really captured me somehow... love the words you used... awesome poem, keep writing!

~angel~

I loved it! It was written so well and the choice of words was sooooooo good. Well done!

Awww.. this was really good.. it made me think.. it flowed well, had good descriptions and a lot of emotion! nice job! 5/5

Wow, this was a really deep and powerful poem. You really chose your words carefully, and you put them in the right places with the right pauses. Excellent job on this one.

Loved it. The flow was smooth the imagery was wonderful and the message inspirational.
5/5

I really loved how you changed things into this metaphor, wonderful... It really does sound correct, like eternal love is what i got out of it... wonderful job, 5/5!

Wow this is so good. Keep it up!

A spark can grow into a flame. :)