Yeah, it's probably the most... obscure poem i've written in a while. good luck, and thanks for the comment

"the hopeful ask why we let sacredness die."

^ I love that line. And it's true, everyday people take what should be a blessing, and what should be a holy, beautiful, important thing and throw it away. It's almost as if no one has any morals anymore. At least, that's what I got from this poem :)

You are very talented; like said above you are really good with words and descriptions! Keep it up!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

It was a little confusing for me at first, but when I read it again I realized that it had a lot of meaning. Very nice work. :]

Wow! now that took me some time to wrap my mind around for sure. But that is what I love about your poetry, you weave with words, you challenge my imagination and you ooze creativity! Lady! you are amazing!

WOW that was totally awesome, a mind twister and blower all in on. Excellent poem, well written and vocabulary was great, love the way you expressed your thoughts and feeling in this one, very well done, keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

I like it

Heartbreakingly sad...brilliantly written..