This poem was very gud, it flowed well!

I'm not sure what you meant.. Maybe, because I can read anything into anything, it worked just fine for me. I really liked it.. Only one line creates a problem for me
"But you refuse accept the fall"
Is this refuse to accept the fall? Or simply refuse. Accept the fall. Maybe a word, or alternative punctuation may complete the line..?
All in all, a great poem. Well done. xx