Out of all your poems, i love this one the most, its awesomee, its really cute, lol like short & sweet. i love it.

but dudee yah thnx for the poem cmnt, you're sweet.

- veronica

U may want to lengthen this poem it is a good start. just a suggestion

Wow good work,reminds me of how i feel now.
keep it up!
-Lisa