Omg a great poem i like the way u wrote it, it is very well written.
take care.5/5

Awh. I like this poem. Creative, great job you two. :]

First of all, thanx for the comment on my poem. And second, very well written piece. It flowed fantastically and it gave a good message to those with a loss of hope. You're great writers...and i really liked the way you wrote this one and you explained the visuals all very well. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Wow that was awesome
nice rhymes and use of words :)
so inspirational *dah*

5/5
love kat - xox

That is beautiful and wonderful poem. I detect a hard life that you had. thank you for reading my poem. I believe that there is a power in the universe. I choose to call that power God. Can I prove it? No. I know I have a higher power today. Excellent poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

Very well written easy flowing poetry,
you both certainly have a way with words.

Keep them coming of the pen, and many people will be reading them.

Success.....Gor

I love this poem! It has such a great meaning behind it. It's something that can give people hope. And I love the way that you described the shoes, it gave it a realistic effect. Great job on this! 5/5

Wow....this is a beautiful poem...so sad but also uplifting!You are an amazing writer!This is just so true...these things actully happen and everyoner takes for granted the fact that we have.....everything.Thank you for writing this!

That was a very uplifting poem!! i loved the story and the pauses. u wrote it just like someone would say it but still had the rhyme going. very hard to do but u did it quite well. great poem!

Wow this poems is amazing! I am glad you commented on my poem, so I could see this. Definantly 5/5

-Natosha B.

Not for the want of repeating words, this is a truly inspirational poem. There is hope for everyone in this. You have excelled yourself. Well done. xx

Hey i'm glad you liked mine, but yours is tremendous. such feeling and exactness in the words. very good. keep it up.

Wow, that was a beautiful poem! I think everyone needs to hear or read something like this more often to remind them of how lucky they are to have what/who they do. Very inspirational!

~dandy~

I am blinking away a tear as I write this. It is simply beautifull. It flows without a hitch, too. I read each line in eager anticipation of the next. It held me and moved me to the very end.

Thanks,
Paggz