That actually brought me to tears...very moving......great poem!

Don't ever say sorry for helping...you're doing what's RIGHT...and i completely respect you for writing this for your friend...if i were Keara, i would love you to DEATH for stopping me...and if she is mad at you right NOW...she'll get over it because she'll see you're doing it out of LOVE...and not hate. Great job and i hope everything works out! 5/5 :)

--*--ScReAm YoUr HeArT OuT--*--

What a sad poem. i agree wiht scream your heart out.. that u shouldnt say ur sorry for trying to help. ppl told me htye were sorry for trying to help me.. but i dont think htye should have. but ne ways this is a good poem. i relaly like it. it has great emotion put in it. keep on writing.
i hope eveyrhting works out ok
take care
luve angie

Willow, tami has fallen away from you and I know you want to help her, but she's dragging you down. She's making everything worse for you AND herself. You can help her, but make sure she doesn't end up hurting you in the process. It wouldn't do you any good in the long run. Please take care on how you go about this.

Love Niquee
xoxoxoxoxo

Why would you be sorry you helped her adn she should be proud you tried helping.. I really liked this poem! 5/5

I really liked this poem
very sad
it hurts people to know people are hurting so much

keep wrighting

lana

Wow. awh it was so good and so sad.
I have goosebumps.
Great job.