Comments : This funny thing called life

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Every soul lost causes heartbreak to at least someone, the world wont be the same if you leave it, u will hurt the hhearts of many and ruinb sum1's life! u r loved by sum1, even u do not know but u r, and u taking ur life away will only make their life worse, its a beautiful poem and it has true talent, keep writing huni and a life lost is never choice in life
    im here if u want to talk huni
    xoxoxo Lucy

  • I like this poem i think its very deep

  • 17 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    Theres always someone that will be sad... always, no matter what you think. this was a really great poem. u keep up ur writing and ur spirits and have courage!

  • 17 years ago

    by *screenplayofdesire*

    Awesome
    from the heart
    i like it

  • Every night
    theres about 10pple who lie awake u
    ever day theres bout 10 pple who got u on there mind
    every day theres one person who want to tell u who they feel
    and if u die they'll never get a chance and thre life might as well end
    sokeep ya self alive cuz ur poems arerockin and i kw theres a special som out thtr all of ur
    (sorry the essay lol)

  • Sorry it suppose 2 say thinkin about u

  • 17 years ago

    by tearsxunseen

    Hey it's alissa! I don't know if I've commented on this one before... oh well. even if i did i am going to do it again. i like it a lot. i guess it just makes sense.