To be honest! it was a really good poem! you deed a good job on it!

I loved this part:
"With barely a motion, his voice reaches into her chest"

5/5 keep it up!!!

OMG this was awesome. The whole thing left me breathless and broken.
It was like watchig a film you expressed everything so vividly.

I really enjoyed reading your poem, I even read it twice. My favorite lines were these:

With barely a motion, his voice reaches into her chest
And extracts the remnants of her broken heart

I loved the descriptions, they were original and gave a strong meaning to your poem. Your word choice was excellent, I love it. And the title really caught my attention.

Great job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby