Deep.

Oh snap. thats deep lol made me think. haha I dont think that could improve. brovo :D

~Terra

Good flow, nice stanza break, again rich in views and captures the audiences mind. Reminds me of a few of my own in some aspects, great job!

This is great! it is so deep and meaningful it really got me thinking
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Your poem mad me think alot about life and in a new way have you ever thought about weather you are alive right know how do you know that you arnt and that you might just be replaying your life up in heaven

This poem gave me a whole new perspective on the death. I have never thought of death in this way. It is a very good poem :)

This poem gave me a whole new perspective on the death. I have never thought of death in this way. It is a very good poem :)

Its really good, so emotionally. i love it
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