I liked it, Dustin.

Im dieng from lost love,
and Im fading.
I try to swallow the pain.
Yet im still hurt and still crying.

That was lovely, but maybe it would be better if you made them longer. More enjoyable to read. Anywho...4/5 It's nice.

xx.N-G-C-S.xx

I LIKED IT

A bit short but good i liked it but i would have liked it more if it was a bit longer and a bit more deep good job though :):):)
will you look at my poems please thnx xxx alex xxx

I Love it...idk if it was short i still likes it...Hope U find that special someone

=)