Lovely poem nice job :):)

would you read my poem its really harsh id love some feedback :):):)
' we are the past, present and future' please please read it thank you xxx alex xxx

Analyze? i can see your need to rhyme.. Well done on the rest of the poem, though hunny, it is really full of love. Very emotional. Well done. xx

Nice job on this poem...loved it...5/5

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~