I liked this one as well. it seemed a little mythodical, but it was overall well written. good job.
Driver

This was really different from all the poems that I normally read, and I think that's why I like it alot more. It was original and not a cliche{sp?} I really really really liked how you opened the poem up, that first stanza just hit me, it was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``