Wow i absolutely loved this poem.. I can relate to it alot...it brought tears to my eyes and made me think of my past i felt tons of emotions with this write..you were very descriptive and your imagery was pefect..it was great all i can really say is wow! definitely 5/5

Omg that poem is soo good darlinn.. soo good!! if this really happened to you then i am soo sorry and you neva deserved it!!

Krissey --
You did a great job on this. I wasn`t really feeling the slang, beacuse this poem was so strong. Maybe you could fix that ;; I can`t imagine a lot of people coming into this category. But maybe they do. Anyway, you did a terrific job. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I really like your poem. I really do. It's really nice.

Aww.. I absolutely love this poem. You described everything so perfectly and it was so sad it made me cry. You did a great job on this. The flow and rhythm was perfect. Great job on this! 5/5

Wonderful, truly amazing. This was beautiful, and did stir emotion within me. I think that the subconscious just knows when you're safe, and mum, in the poem, is exactly that.. Well done. xx

Awww i loved this, keep it up

That is sad at start but happy at end....

Wow! your a very talented poet! you are gifted! did this really happen to you? because the way you expressed it seemed so real that it mustve happened to you! this poem touched me! my mum had a similar experience to that young girl in the poem and its comforting knowing what my mum mightve felt. i know how i might be able to comfort her! anyways, your awesome! mwahmwah!
love from shae-natasha gilliland

xoxo

Wow that was great! i dont really comment on peoples poems but yours was great.
keep up the good work!

Wow...

You bring something new to poetry
"call that life"

I never even had a chance to fight
Aww that was really sad and emotional. It really sucked me in. I have many friends that have been in the same situation. I LOVED UR POEM!! Im going to read more by you and would love if you would comment on mine! Thanks 6/5

Omg amazing. if it's true, i'm so sorry. if it's even basesd on something true, i'm sory. it was amazing!!

Well done

Terrific poem- descriptive and down-to-earth.

Alsome as usual!!!

Kool kool l...love it

Kool kool l...love it

What a amazing poem, I really loved it so much amazing words