Comments : Choking and smoking
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17 years ago
by Aussie
Gr8 poem...small but says alot. keep writing:)
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17 years ago
by Ike Dizzle
It sounds great so far. The beginnig is straight to the point. 5/5
-Kakashi
by Aussie
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Gr8 poem...small but says alot. keep writing:) |
by Ike Dizzle
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It sounds great so far. The beginnig is straight to the point. 5/5 |
