Beautifully done. I am not usually fan of this format, but this one had me all the way. Great job.

Loretta --
I think you did a pretty good job on this. The flow, grammar, and spelling were all absolutely flawless. That`s definitely good. The theme seemed a little vague at first, but once I re-read it, it was all pretty clear. You did a great job, keep it up!
5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood