Nice job, i think this was my favorite actually... it was different, i really enjoyed it... keep it up 5/5

Yeah.
I broke up with a guy called daniel AGES ago he was/is a prick.

I was confused at first but i understand now(your poem)

its very good
5/5
~Emah
p.s thank you for the comment its appreciated so much

Nicely written again, with tons of emotion...But you repeated yourself a bit too much for my likings and it sounded a lot like your other poem.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5