This is a really good poem..theres a lot of feeling in it, good job, keep it up

I really liked it well done=]

I see this alot in your poems:
Soft sweet whispers you tell me in my ear. While kissing my head and holding me close and near.

i would rarher have done this:
Soft sweet whispers you tell me in my ear,
While kissing my head
and holding me close and near.

just a thought though

You have captured a wonderful place in the heart. It brings one pleasure just from the reading of it. :)