LOL.
Jeffrey this doesn't sound like you!
But i still like it :]
& my favourite line is "but the taste on your lips grew stale"

I'M SORRY I LEFT LAST NIGHT MK.
i just didn't want to talk to Ken ;]
xx

LMAooo
your
comment was funny.
and.
i'm sorry for
being mean ;[
K?K.

"I've succumb to temptations shown
in the nightlife of Boston"

succumb to temptations shown
in the nightlife of anywhere, it's called america loves sex

"sorry to interrupt this fairy tale
in which you feel loved, and I feel chained"

I've had a fairy tale like that.though I guess you can't call it a fairy tale then could you...

"you fell from the pedestal I placed you on
discovered some doubt in my devotion"

some people just never measure up, some people don't want to, others aren't supposed to. love if true shouldn't have one on a pedestal

"I believe poetry was used to drive away love"

" I thought poetry was the fruit of love"

" of a fine stought love it may, but if it's only a vuage inclination then I'm certain it kills it with one stanza"

theres a little Pride and Prejudice for you

I love it, your RAW, and ANGRY ,GRRRR

[WIP]

Wow i lvoe the pedastal bit adn i jus lveo how it was like a letter.Wayy kewl..love it.

Lissa

These people need to go away.
because they obviously don't know this is MY poem ;]
i decided.harhar.

I like it..its pretty gd..:D keep up the gd work:D

Wip is a complete see yew en tee. thanks.

S'bit good..? Yeahhh.x

The title made me all hot and bothered so I decided to read LUCY'S POEM. It was good. I suppose. Nice work?

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5

Um. The things with this poem is. I saw the depth, the emotion, the heart. But. It didn't keep me reading. I had to make myself do so. I don't know how to advise you on that.

My soulmate is a w h o r e......but i love him anyway

j/k (bout the w h o r e part)

im using commenting your poems as a way to procrastinate writing my speech and paper:-/...wish you were here so i could practice for you

pee ess- im getting that scottish accent down ;-)

Niice poem, its really truthful and honest & it flowed really well

Brooke<3

Very nice and sentimental!!!

Love the title, love the poem, you're awesome keep it up Shanik