Thats amazing!! great writing!! love it alot!! chekout sum of my poems and yeah.. comment and stuff!! oki

It's great...the f.u.c.k.i.n.g just makes it so much wonderful...lol...ur a great writer...keep it up...

This poem is great!!! 5/5

I like how you get to the point in this one nicely written.

-Kayla

*nodS* i luv this poem!! hehe.. clowns can be horrid.. u got ur point across well.. heh... iluv ur work and cant wait for more.. keep it up!
xXx

I really like this poem. it's good keep up the good work. plz read my new poem Suddenly Sleeping (forever) thanx shanik