First kiss

by stacy   Aug 8, 2006


Driven by the impatient curiosity of the lips
but led by the sly yet touching finger tips
it is new,you are unexperienced it is all so exiting
it can not be explained by any poets writing

swept off your feet floating in anticipation
you wounder how god made such a creation
you feel so wrong but at the same time right
you are heavy with emotion yet you feel so light

it does not matter when where why or how
cause it is not true love or any type of vow
just your first kiss to show your affection
although you will feel a slight connection
no one will ever share that same kinda kiss
cause it was your vary first intimate bliss

and when it ends all you could do is smile
and stare into each-others eyes for a while

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  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    I actually liked this poem and its meaning. The flow was a little rocky though. You also need to add punctuation to help it flow better. There are also misspelled words and some sentences scream for capitalization. Over-all the poem is good, I wouldn't say excellent because it needs a bit of work. How long have you been writing again? If this is beginners work I say that you did great. Keep up the good work. You'll be on your way in no time at all. : )

    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by stacy

    Please rate my poem or leave a comment

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