Comments : Smoke and mistakes

  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara

    I really like this poem. I'm not sure what I liike about it, it's just a feeling of not being able to get a feeling on paper, and then having someone do it for you. Really like this one!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara

    I really like this poem. I'm not sure what I liike about it, it's just a feeling of not being able to get a feeling on paper, and then having someone do it for you. Really like this one!! 5/5