Aw, wow hun! These were great lyrics, with so much emotion in them. Wow! I'd love to hear this to some music. There's not a thing I would change. It was a great song! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow this is really good and thanks for the nice reviw you gave me

Wow, i'm speechless...this is awesome! I really want to hear the lyrics put to music, it would be so beautiful. I'm amazed...5/5!

Another great work from u, i give u 5/5

Awwwh this was really sad, but very well written and expressed.