Great poetry.

Wow, you did that extreamly well. i can see where you are comeing from, i can look at the world and see so many terrible thing that really shouldnt be there. yet the people are the main issue, most just walk over the problem as if it wasnt there. if we are going to start the help the world we must start with the people who do not see what they do to it. if that happens maybe we are one step into helping the planet that we are destorying.