Comments : I Would Love Too

  • 17 years ago

    by APoeticLetdown

    Hey. Just so everyone knows. I'm well aware that the "too" at the end is the wrong one to make sense, people keep telling me that I should change it.

    But I meant to do it. That way it's not only saying "I would love to move on" as it seems that it is, but it is also saying "I will love again" and that's where the trick is. It's just one hint of hope at the end of a sad poem.

    Man I like that, I hope you all do too!