It wasnt to bad i mean it could use some work.. bu you got your point accross n the ones that can relate to this like i can will see past the mistakes n can totally understadn wheere you be commin from! it was really good!!

WOW this is a really Sweet poem i like it very WOW!!

**stephanie

Very meanful 5/5

THiS iS REALLY SAD! iT WAS BEAUTiFULLY WRiTTEN THOUGH

x3--------SHELBY