Simply amazing. I don't know what else to say. 5/5

[[ Poetess ]]

Wow, this is a great poem, and one of my favorite that i have read here,
I really like the idea of the pen bringing out the thoughts, it is so original, great job
as always 5/5

For my pen, it brings what lips can't heave
Through truths and lies, my pen may bleed

^^Loved those lines! Such a great write, Sarah! You've done an excellent job! Keep it up, hun! 5/5

Natalie``

I love this poem. I can realte so well to it. When anything happens I just grab my journal and place the pen upon the paper and I start to write. It might not be good but it sure does make me fell alot better. I really enjoyed this poem. Very easy to read, and the flow was exellent.

A beautiful poem. Your rhymes were different and fresh. Keep it up

Great Job!

I love this poem

Hey i loved the words you used in this like: "Inking the feelings of my heart
Tearing each bitter word apart"
Its really good.
~Kyra~